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Critique my lil teaser please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Franck_clever
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  • Mar 9 2011 10:45AM
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  • http://vimeo.com/20818347>
    • Mar 9 2011 10:53AM
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    Franck_clever
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    http://vimeo.com/20818347

    dude i suckkkkkk
    Mar 9 2011 10:56AM
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    Trojan~Man
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    ^ yes you do.lol



    the only thing that id have to say would be to let the shots go on for a little longer. i understand the affect you were going for and it was good but maybe let them go for a bit longer ... that flat off the a frame at the start looked sick :P
    Mar 9 2011 11:04AM
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    Franck_clever
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    ^thanks a lot man!
    Mar 9 2011 11:07AM
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    Franck_clever
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    something else?
    Mar 10 2011 10:27AM
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    Franck_clever
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    ..
    Mar 10 2011 4:10PM
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    Brentizzle
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    is it a teaser for an edit or for a ski movie your making or what?
    Mar 10 2011 9:46PM
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    grilledsteezeyo
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    i liked the idea of cutting it to only see a portion of the trick for the teaser, but some of the cuts seemed a bit random. it might just be me, but try to time it more with the music your using next time.
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    Franck_clever
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    thanks for all your comments! apreciate that! im making a little movie at the end of the season with my friends for fun
    Mar 10 2011 11:20PM
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    Franck_clever
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    All edited with my laptop trackpadd! forgot my mouse and that suck
    Mar 10 2011 11:52PM
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