Gopro can start to look weak in low-lighting. I think you can brighen it up with color correcter to make it look alot better, dont know alot about it but something you might wanna look into for better edits. And ya song is overused.
Skiing was good, kinda in the same stage you are with the whole trying to grab 3s. Maybe get some sort of pole to mount the gopro on so follows are less shaky? Overall deecent edit, just a different song and less text at the beggining but it was good