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Urban Edit Critique

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ngates_EC
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First Urban Edit. Hit me up with feedback.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6cb_Pm1B3AA


+k if someone can embed it.

Feb 4 2011 12:26PM
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cobra_commander
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dont use biggie. its been used 10,000 times before.
clean the stairs.
repetitive.
Feb 4 2011 1:59PM
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MAC.D
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this...
Feb 4 2011 2:09PM
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A.Eberhard
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This... Way to many railslides on the same rail.

For the skiers though they aren't really locking into the rail. I can tell cause they are slowly falling off the other side near the end of the rail. If that rail was longer you would be falling off every time. So work on getting on urban style rails... along with keeping those shoulders parallel with the rail.
Feb 4 2011 3:53PM
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BrightonFridays
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Atleast they all fell of early on that train
Feb 4 2011 7:20PM
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.Ian.
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Feb 4 2011 7:50PM
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ngates_EC
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thanks, how did you get it to work?
Feb 4 2011 9:22PM
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.Ian.
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No problem. You have to use the old embed code and disable the fancy editor in your account settings
Feb 4 2011 9:24PM
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.Ian.
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Sorry I just embedded but never actually gave advice/ critiqued it! I liked it and it seemed like you guys had fun and made a solid edit. If I were you I would go out and hit some different rails and use some of the footy from this edit and make an edit with multiple spots. What I would do is leave the snow on the stairs on your first hits in case you fell onto them you wouldn't get rocked to hard, but after everyone was comfortable with the rail clear them off. Then start filming with nice clean stairs. I guess I could bring up the fact that biggie is over used but other people have stated that, although personally I think it fit in great with this edit. IMO. Great edit overall, keep skiing and making more! and have fun!
Feb 4 2011 10:54PM
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ngates_EC
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Thanks for the critique man. and whats the old embed code? I want to upload it to the videos page.
Feb 5 2011 7:33PM
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Chompo.
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Decent edit. But it did get really repetitive. Don't use biggie as said before. And slide the whole rail and dont just slide of early.
Feb 5 2011 11:21PM
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gnarles.
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dont cheat out the kink at the end and actually slide it to
Feb 6 2011 1:44PM
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SkiThe603
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i got bored quick
Feb 6 2011 7:00PM
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pr4l
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I would suggest more angle variety and maybe use a tripod on some of your shots, along with cleaning the stairs. Looked fun though!
Feb 6 2011 7:49PM
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cooper.fry
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song choice, no.
work on rails more.
keep it up though, good work.
Feb 7 2011 1:40AM
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BDWYE
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Throw some more spots in there, use an original song as well
Feb 7 2011 2:15AM
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tall_pants
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sick edit. i have the same skis as the guy in the gray

Feb 7 2011 10:03PM
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ngates_EC
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Thanks for all the feedback guys. I was just filming, not skiing. And the reason we don't have other rails is because we are at boarding school and that is the only hitable rail.
Feb 8 2011 2:09PM
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MADDECENT
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for the skiers.

On your end, work on getting more angles. your intro shots were shaky, use a tripod.
Feb 8 2011 8:39PM
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