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Critique My Edit please (you should cuz i said the magic word)

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DG.3
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quick edit made a night at grouse. shot with olympus pen ep2, edited on fcp7. critique skiing and filming, AND PLEASE GIVE SPECIFIC EDITING CRITIQUES OR CHANGES I SHOULD MAKE. cuz ill be reediting it a least once. Thanks! +K





probably fucked up so if anyone wants to be super nice heres the link.

http://vimeo.com/19552811
Feb 4 2011 1:54AM
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Doug.
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I thought the song fit really well with the edit and overall it was pretty good. The clips were the right length. Not too long but not too short.

Just work on the shakyness of the filming.
Feb 4 2011 4:10AM
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D_War
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when filming multiple people do not pan back up hill until the prior skier has finished banging.. make the skiers spread out more. always roll a few seconds before to be sure you are in focus,
Feb 4 2011 8:47AM
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D_War
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in addition try to give more head room and leave the skier's more room in front of them (nose room) so the viewer can see what is coming next
Feb 4 2011 8:49AM
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Ben.
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terrible fake film burns.


shaky followcams.
Feb 4 2011 7:19PM
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mseward
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The follows were really shaky and some of the affects were a bit weird. Other than that is pretty good.
Feb 4 2011 11:41PM
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