i dislike you as a person, but thats irrelevant.
the edit was pretty damn good. i personally would not have used the slowmo the first time you did, but the rest of the rate changes were tastefully used. a couple of the shots had a little bit of the typical gopro shake but i have yet to find a great solution to that problem. (if you find one let me know haha) the only other thing was the flat light on one of the days which as far as i'm concerned doesn't really matter but some of the media/arts snobs would bitch at that.
great song choice by the way. its a nice change of pace for park edits.