pretty good. i would say get some more creative angles, mix things up, try the end of the box, really high looking down, you know something to set this apart from everyone else.
the song made me want to kill myself, but it worked. seeing as this is a 1/2 edit make, im assuming that the other half will have a diffrent song. new song= new genre for sure, rap or something, but definetly no more ravey techno.
solid work, i give it a 7 (USC would be a 10) so with a little work you could definetly have a solid edit.