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Not sure if i like this photo? tell me if you like it.
I like it, but the face seems a bit washed out.
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thanks. i wanna bring out her face a lil more i think
i agree the colors are a little bland she kinda blends into the bushes
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i like it, were you going for that desaturated sort of look? ive always liked that when done well. maybe post the original so people can see the difference?
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But honestly I would consider this a full step up from the recent portraits you've posted. So Id definitely like to see the whole set ( 5-6 more.)
I think your processing is fine, and the shots fine, but the two aren't meshing very well, and it kind of irks me.
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I also think that the blurry foreground foliage on either side (out by her hands) is making the whole image a little more confusing visually, because of how they sit with the sharper parts of the image.
It's a pretty good photo though, and the processing is nice.
Remember that you see things that your subject can't see. If you had asked her to stick her head a little forward, you may have been able to do away with the relatively hard edge of the shadow and the little bit of the double chin. It may have drawn her jawline a little more. Then again, it also might have made her look like she was awkwardly sticking her head forward.
I also kinda wish the blurry plant sticking up in front of the left side of her body wasn't there.
tru tru. thanks. i defintiely wanna do a reshoot without those ugly unfocused wheat things
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