I enjoyed that a lot, I do feel like the ending was a bit weak though. Maybe if it had ended on the glide shot of the two kids on the couch instead of pushing in on the empty chair. Overall though it was great, I really liked the lighting in the shot of the bottles in the window.
Put some time into filming some things. You keep posting edits that you say yourself "I didn't really put much time into it, whatever", and when you ask for crit on that, I'm not sure what you are really looking for. haha.
T "It's my storm. I can make it do whatever I want."
"What the fuck is wrong with you kids?! How would you like it if I came and had sex in front of your house?"
"I heard you guys banned a chick with thyroid cancer cause she was weird looking.
You guys are fucking terrible."- awsomoz$
We were all expecting something GRAND for our massive efforts down the line. Needless to say, all the money went to drive us 100km from home and play frisbee golf for a week at a "resort" aimed for trips for retarded people"