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SkierPT
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Hey Newschoolers. I just made a little edit from our ice rink snow rail jam. Critiques and tips would be great. Heres the url.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VOulkP_XJA&hd=1

I know it needs work but i think I'm improving quite a bit. To compare, heres my edit from a few years ago....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BOpp0ZWInDo

The second ones painful to watch...just a warning to yall.
Nov 13 2010 10:43AM
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Ducky.
Posts: 5811 - Karma: 1,420
Bad link
Nov 13 2010 11:06AM
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nutsnbolts
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Nov 13 2010 1:57PM
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SkierPT
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Hmmmm they work for me..
Nov 13 2010 2:38PM
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Deezy
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Nov 13 2010 2:47PM
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nutsnbolts
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Your hands are EVERYWHERE...
Nov 13 2010 2:48PM
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Deezy
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FOLLOWCAM NEEDED

and get closer and use wider angle, keep ur hands warm so u can film better. be smoooooooth. shoot with ur own style and angles, and your shots will be like 100x better.
i guess.
Nov 13 2010 2:49PM
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Blurst
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your snowboard is so little
Nov 13 2010 8:50PM
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A.Eberhard
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- Nasty Titles... simple is better the ones you chose were awful
- Song... Did not match the riding style at all not a good choice.
- Wearing goggles? Was it really necessary?
- Change up that angle filming was bland and boring
- Intro of you setting up the rail has been done many time try to change it up or put a spin on it.

Nov 13 2010 8:53PM
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