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Critique my re-edit please

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MotherFuckaJones
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So this is the original video I made back in July I think.

Vets rope swing+tree from C-Med on Vimeo.

And this is the edit I did today with some new footage, but I wanted to give the edit a different feel.

Vets Re-edit from C-Med on Vimeo.

Oct 31 2010 10:04PM
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MADDECENT
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Work on tying in your b roll.
It seems you had a ton of shots randomly in those that didn't belong. Be more selective.
Oct 31 2010 10:47PM
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MotherFuckaJones
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B-roll as in where I would flash in clips with the music? Yea those were supposed to be things that had to do with the lake, but I can see where that could be confusing to a person that wasn't actually there.
Oct 31 2010 11:29PM
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Static
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the little variation you had in it was too fleeting
Nov 1 2010 2:26AM
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MotherFuckaJones
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Could you be more specific please? :)
Nov 1 2010 12:52PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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B-roll = filler

aka non rope-swinging
Nov 1 2010 4:57PM
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