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shane.
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Im bored so I want to hear what people think about this.

Parker Healy 09-10 Promo from Shane Healy on Vimeo.

Oct 3 2010 8:31PM
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MADDECENT
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1:15. Those cuts should be more uniform, they looked really rough to me.

Didnt like the lime green cursive titles

There were a couple really good sunset shots you had, but it surprised me when it just went back to day again. Try to tie those into a night skiing segment or something.

That kid is a really good snowboarder
Oct 3 2010 8:53PM
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liquid_flow
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i enjoyed it. maybe some different angle shots maybe some fading out of focus and i agree at 1:15 those could flow a little better then they are right now but other than that good job
Oct 3 2010 9:07PM
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A.Eberhard
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Some of the filming was really bad, but some of it was really good. I would just try and be more steady and smooth with your filming and your edit will be looking a lot better. Still pretty good.

Where can I download that song though?
Oct 3 2010 9:27PM
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MADDECENT
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http://www.4shared.com/get/rfHQjFbY/Fabulous_ft_Jay_Z_-_Breathe__r.html
Oct 3 2010 9:35PM
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p.hawks
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one more tip, and i only sw this once, but make sure you turn image stabilization off if you a shooting with a fisheye
Oct 3 2010 10:15PM
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T.DUDE
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good stuff! minus snowboarders. hahaha i still respect!
Oct 3 2010 11:40PM
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SgtSteamy
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Most of my beef wasn't with the editing at all. It was with the shooting. The follow cam's and moving shot's were by far the most ingaging and interesting. While the shot's that were taken standing seemed boring and less impressive. I'd say the music choice was a bit cliche but alright.

As far as the "editing" goes I think you did a good job. It's hard to peace everything together.  I'd say next time have only ONE filmer, YOU. Choose less cliche music, and maybe color correct the washed out shots.  Other than that you did great!
Oct 3 2010 11:53PM
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shane.
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Thanks for the input guys. ill work on what was said for the next edit i make. It was mostly filmed by me and one friend and the snowboarder is my little brother. He's 14
Oct 4 2010 1:04PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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yeah the editing was okay...alot of the transitions looked cheap and the title was bad but other than that nothing to complain about.

i can't believe that kid has so many good tricks while at the same time looking like such a kook.
Oct 4 2010 1:41PM
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A.Eberhard
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Thanks man +k.
Oct 4 2010 4:09PM
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