1 is simply wrong. Commas denoting time frames and particular instances are never preferential. As for fragments, they are never grammatically correct. Artistic license is what separates high English literature from proper technical syntax, and you have neither the license, nor the ability to execute fragments correctly. As the "Grammar" police, you would know that, but you a simple high schooler.
Errors in your sentences:
- You forgot the comma after "as I did".
- You spelled "beezey" incorrectly.