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Please check out my edit.

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fuck.your.tits
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So this is my latest edit..please give feedback either negative or positive
http://vimeo.com/14323410
Aug 21 2010 5:41PM
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miroz
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FUCK! I typed a whole fucking critique for this and my computer fucking logged me out of NS and deleted it. FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK.

I don't have time to spend another 20 minutes on this. I'll sum it up.

Tripod please.

Cut out the falls - they're unnecessary and extraneous.

Keep your video efficient and succinct.

Keep in mind what you want to portray.

Work on your transitions - some were kinda lame.

Switch up your shots.

Keep practicing.

Don't take my brevity the wrong way - I'm pissed at my stupid fucking computer, so its not directed at you. If you want anything more in depth feel free to PM me.

-Milos
Aug 21 2010 6:34PM
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hue.
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i agree with blondie

embed for the lazy

Crankworx Edit 2010 from Max McRae on Vimeo.

Aug 21 2010 6:53PM
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hue.
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Hopefully this works

Crankworx Edit 2010 from Max McRae on Vimeo.

Aug 21 2010 6:54PM
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hue.
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okay sorry i give up, sorry for the trip post
Aug 21 2010 6:55PM
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Sklar
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^ you have to use the "old embed code" from vimeo
Aug 21 2010 7:10PM
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A.Eberhard
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Crankworx Edit 2010 from Max McRae on Vimeo.




I will save you!
Aug 21 2010 7:17PM
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ILoveOhio
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Hahahahhahah at the error message.

Here's my few words of advice.

-Give the edit some sort of a "story" or a flow. It seemed like you just threw clips in a timeline.

-Use the music to enhance your video. The song choice wasn't the best as it is, but still, use a song's different melodies to evoke emotion.

-No corny transitions please.

-Don't put a shitload of shots in when they are all very similar. It gets extremely boring.

-Color Correct/Grade

There's more but I'm lazy.

Keep shooting and it will get better EVERY time. I promise.




Aug 21 2010 8:59PM
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fuck.your.tits
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Thanks everyone. to answer to some comments. I couldn't be bothered to bring my tripod up because I wasn't sure I was even gunna be filming. And the biggest thing was it's crankworx and theres people everywhere so you can't really get to many different angle and we obvs weren't allowed in past the fence making it harder for better/sicker angles.
was it somewhat decent though?
Aug 22 2010 2:32AM
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fuck.your.tits
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Oh and I looked over those comments again and I completely see what you mean about the no real story/beginning end. It should have thought that through and you will deff. see that in my edits to come. thx again
Aug 22 2010 2:43AM
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