I like your shit dude, a nice contrast to the usual m/a dubstep threads. good chiller music with a nice sound.
as far as critiques go, I think you could have made the vocals a bit louder on "almost beautiful" you were mumbling a bit and I was straining to get all the lyrics. also, do you have lyrics for "something came up a while ago"? I was feelin' it.
looks like all the commas decided to chill together instead of going where they should have.
and all the periods were like fuck that and just dipped.-Dr.NS
dude i feel ya
the other day i wrote 'poop' on the wall of my house and my parents got so mad they spanked me - no_steeze