You asked for a critique, so I'll give you one. Overall though, as a precurser, I'd like to say that I was impressed and it was very well done to be shot on a go pro.
The first shot is lopsided - if you look at the horizon its slanted. You can fix that in your editing program, but keep it in mind next time when you're shooting.
Second shot was boss, although I thought the transition was a little too long and I didn't like how it immediately started zooming in. Just leaving it wide would've been fine IMO. It was sick that you got such a cool focus on that shot though. Ver nice.
Loved the car shots. Very cool effect.
1:36 shaky camera. I'm sure you know.
I wasn't a huge fan of the black transitions. I feel like they aren't creative and that you could've put something a little more fitting in there. Personally, I think that they take away from the video a little bit by disrupting the flow, you know? You go from sped up video to nothing, and then back to sped up video - its just quite the jump I guess.
1:50 I'm impressed you were able to line this up so well with no viewfinder...verry nicely done. The windmill points the viewers eye to the sky where it is entertained by the clouds. Good job on this one.
Second song was a little too energetic I thought...I'm not sure if it was the second song I guess, but just that second segment...
The water shot was cool - if you notice, when the sun comes out it lightens the grass but darkens the water, almost like a natural "negative" effect? Lawl I like it. I thought the angle was a little off though, meaning that it felt tilted to the right a little - again, look at the horizon. You can't really tell that through a GoPro though, so thats just something to take care of in post.
The overzoom on that shot too was a little distracting. As a rule of thumb, if I'm doing zooms in post I really try to avoid going too far out because then you get said black lines and your video doesn't fill the screen anymore, which is a bit awks unless you have something else transitioning into it.
2:26 Transition from black/white to color = fabulous. Fit the song (surprisingly) and that blue REALLY pops out at you. I loved it.
I'm not sure what that black, cut off corner was in the top right but I think I would've tried to get rid of it.
I just went through the video and picked it apart. Overall mang, I'm very impressed, you put together a pretty cool piece of work here. I little tweaking I think would do it good, but you should be proud of this. Keep some of these things in mind though so the next time you shoot your video will be even better.
Keep it real mang, and keep shooting!
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