Dear NS...some shameless self promotion +k

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hey NS, i've been applying for marketing internships hoping my video skills will help me gain an edge, but I haven't had a lot of feedback. They're kind of scattered content wise, so any input how I can make them more "marketable" would be great.

+k hope you guys are having a good spring thanks for looking

http://vimeo.com/1343286

Apr 8 2010 1:35PM

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feihlination

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is this for epileptic awareness day?

Apr 8 2010 2:49PM

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fourtwozero

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im no expert but those are lookin pretty sick

Apr 8 2010 2:54PM

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uni-corn

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If you are trying to use that video that you posted for a professional type of thing(portfolio, application, etc.), I would recommend taking out the inappropriate things.

Other than that, I liked it.

Apr 8 2010 2:57PM

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dickhead1

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pretty sweet,

looks good

Apr 8 2010 3:01PM

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EastCoast315

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What about it was inappropriate?

That was ill brother, I'm really digging it. Good editing

Apr 8 2010 3:06PM

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elemeno89

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make you feel that way was a pretty sic video. i liked it a lot. keep the good work coming!

Apr 8 2010 3:12PM

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Skittle.

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nicely edited and filmed

Apr 8 2010 4:02PM

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BMskier

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i didnt really like it. the editing was cool in a way, but all i got out of it was that you can shoot time lapses and a couple other things.

Apr 8 2010 4:12PM

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lizzatronn

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pretty dope. smooth editing

Apr 8 2010 4:16PM

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Deezy

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Dude, i like your style, at first i was thinking you should be more "professional" but i can see that in your way, your doing everything perfect. Everything in there is styled in your own way, and its super sick.

Apr 8 2010 4:18PM

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IdaHomie

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Prestige Worldwide.....

srsly that vid is cool though

Apr 8 2010 4:19PM

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shredables

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i like the editing, i think that you should partner up with someone who has great filming skills.
because your editing capabilities are very strong, however the shots themselves could use some work.

as far as being 'marketable', maybe find a theme that people can follow and relate to.

Apr 8 2010 5:31PM

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chewy15

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make you feel that way got me pretty stoked. it had a sick vide

Apr 8 2010 5:58PM

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.newman.

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pretty nice but a couple of things...
I saw in some of ur other vids there was some more chill stuff and idk if this is just me but everything seemed fast and hectic in this vid.
so slow some stuff down.
also, try taking some shots of people playing sports and incorporate them.
other than that... real nice work editing and filming

Apr 9 2010 8:48PM

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Style+eeze

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that was pretty dope!

i really liked it!

Apr 9 2010 8:54PM

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vzdz

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thanks a lot guys +k to all for your input

Apr 10 2010 3:47PM

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Username_42069

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there was a butt hanging out and i think the party-type sequence i guess could be seen as inappropriate, also some language in the song. i agree with uni-corn, not that im against inappropriateness, but those things aren't going to help in a professional setting. good luck duude

Apr 10 2010 4:19PM

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