this our first edit its pretty shitty we ere planning n filming some more but then our hill closed.....tell me any good tips and stuff i filmed which is why im only in about 3 shots
1 suggestion. dont use a clip more then once unless its from different angles.
and your cameras kinda sucky, but thats not something id worry about.
you kids are 9? thats ill.
Second kid boosted the hell out of that rainbow rail. That was awesome.
More close shots, less chiddy bang, no weird effects.
As said before, don't use the same trick twice unless from different angles.
Also I would try to add some more variety in with jumps and what not. Maybe work on some 3s with grabs, steezy little ones, just to bring a little more style to the edit as a whole.
Pretty good for the first edit though.