New edit at Boulder Park in 1080p! check it!

Criticism:
1. turn steady shot/ois off when filming fisheye
2. Make sure to clean your lens, its very distracting to have drops of water or a dirty lens on screen
3. Get more creative with shots, dont use the same angles too much, throw in some long lens
4. dont over edit somethings, like the one shot where you rewind it like 2 or 3 times before they hit the flat down box

That being said, i did like some of the follows, flow, and song

Thanks man +K

good song but the editing didn't seem to match it that well. The rewinds looked like they were close but they were more distracting than interesting. At around 2 min where the song gets epic so should the riding but instead it goes to a simple riding to the lift shot.

Do some color correction.  The colors seemed a bit flat to me.  With a little adjustment, they could really pop.  But agree with everyone else a bit, not bad tho!

Thanks for the help guys, i think i'll make some changes and re-upload later. Any more ideas?

this is not so much editing wise, but i can only watch so many fs 270s, fs sw ups, and landing forward out. maybe less of those and a couple switch outs would be nice, seems like the skiers have the skill to do it. otherwise i liked it

colours need some serious tweaking

Yeah this is what I was gonna say it just got really repetitive.

The only thing i can put a finger on is the water drops. I liked everything else, nice edit! =)

I didn't like the vignette. Other than that, it was edited well. The only other problem is that it gets boring. To fix this: don't be repetitive with the shots; that was all rails. Mix it up more, add some jump stuff.

not trying to be mean but im gonna give a few harsh critiques. sometimes you gotta be stern...


DEFINITLY steady shot off when filming fisheye. makes everything shake and look like poop. also when your filming fisheye pleasepleaseplease use the rule of thirds. it really does do wonders.

when your filming standing still make sure the shot is good. try not to have trains because it tends to make things a lot more complicated and usually it looks li9ke crap because your trying to get everything in. film them going into the feature. film them going out for a little so you can make a cut before the camera starts to jerk. because the edit didnt really flow well at all

i really wasnt digging that border. if you want to use a viganette then make one in vegas (thats what your using i think) go to media generators and custom gradient..

song also was a little much for the filming editing and ski skill

also those flashes got pretty annoying..




other than that though it was a nice start

whats the song?

only suggestion would be ride out farther if you going to show it, dont revert of stop and use that in the edit just cut it earlier or ride out looks really bad when you see all that.