that 'dance with the devil' freestyle was pretty bad dude, maybe try making better freestyles, not longer ones. its not about how many hours you have, its about how good each one is.
Aim for some shit like this, which is off the top of his head by the way.
dude what the fuck you dont even rhyme most of the time
Damn thats impressive for having downs syndrome. good shit man, you should send that to the special olympics.
i honestly love your music, you are the next lil' wayne, keep at it dawg.
FML that hurt my head
Wow. That was so bad. For your sake, I hope you're a troll