to be honest dude, I saw no improvement in the second video.. Id almost say the first was better just because of the filming.
OG poster - you had some pretty good filming, but you picked a fairly hard song to edit to. You can't just mickey mouse to the song like you can in rap. Feel what the song is doing and match it up with shots/speed.. There were plenty of times when the song was picking up, but you were slowing down. (clip length/speed)
And how creepy is it that I know you boarded at the same place asian allen skis..
"why do people talk shit about my videos and my pictures? because im a fruitbooting faggot thats why." - asian_allen