i'm assuming your animation stopped after the "startup" title? i was liking it until it faded to black and the titles got super simple. you should've had your friend let you do the titles as well! but yeah i thought it worked pretty well.
the beginning title was sick. but you asked for critique so...
your camera on the start title seemed a bit jerky at some points, also when you had the movie title fade in it didnt really flow right to me. i think it would have been better if you had your camera pan onto it and it was already just there.
like said before after that the titles were a bit of a letdown.
im just starting the watch the movie now but it looks sick.
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