wait, does he die? i didnt get that, maybe something to clear that up.
i did a vid like this last year about drinking and driving, it ended with a car crash (i used dear sister music, a couple kids got it), than i had a shot of a classroom of sad kids. the principals talking on the intercom about the dead kid (my friend recorded it and i added it in to the video with an effect to make it sound like a pa), i dolly down a row of kids at desks to the friend of the kid who dies, than he puts his head down on his desk in sadness.
Nice work, it was pretty well shot.
Agreed with the scene with the girl, pretty random and didn't make a whole lot of sense, if you re-did it would be a whole lot better.
Saw a video once were they faked an injection and it was pretty intense, if you can find someone who is diabetic, thats what they used.
The music fit well too.