whoa geeze man! well, i guess i mean for the text to be more on the bottom right (still not the chest), i had to move it to the middle so i could get most of the design in on the detail template.
and the point of the text being really small is so when you look at it closely you can read it, and it says something special that makes you smile! i think it's nice when clothes have details that are very thoughtful but more difficult to spot, i suppose. it's not like logo stuff that's supposed to get all up in your face. you dig?
i'm totally not sure about the squiggly things also, i just wanted some more color so i tried that. i'm usually more a fan of simpler stuff, so here's the clean version:
oh and, i know NOTHING about visual balance. i said i'm just learning, kinda fucking around.
and the text is just some shit that gets me positive and stoked:
bluebirdparkdayspowderdays, you gotta
l o v e everything days.
one of those things
that make it worth it-- all day, everyday.
everything in his world, her world, your world, my world,
might be completely upsidedown, ** "upsidedown" is actually upsidedown**
but for a just a little while, you can make the noise stop.
stoked, freed, liberated, totally in love --whatever it
means to you when there’s three feet of fresh and a phat line
STARING you in the FACE, call it anything you want and
STOMP IT HARD.
thanks for the constructive feedback though, guys.