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Couple new songs let me know what you think (rick roll rap remix and some jazzy tunes from a fellow NSer's beat)

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SirFryanator
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http://www.thesixtyone.com/NGP/collection/all/

I really tried to get the voice a lot better this time, also quality and beats. If you don't like rap then don't critique.

I know I sound white, I don't try to sound black, yes my accent comes out when I rap. I don't want to explain myself other than that. things that I can fix would be nicer to be pointed out.

Thanks for any support, love, or critique. Hate, even, if it's constructive!

- Matt
Nov 26 2008 11:24PM
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steezebeast
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new songs are sick. rick rolled lol
Nov 26 2008 11:36PM
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SirFryanator
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^oh and mods, I'm not actually rick rolling people it's just a beat

thanks
Nov 26 2008 11:39PM
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dodgeridge*rider
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dude
none of the mods would care about that
haha

but i dont really like your voice
no offense
the rick roll beat is sick as fuck though
Nov 26 2008 11:46PM
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SirFryanator
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well sorry I can't change my voice. any other suggestions?
and btw if mods think anything is a rick roll then they delete it, so I think they do care :P
Nov 26 2008 11:49PM
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Peter.
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Try not to use that echo effect too much, yeah, for some reason your voice to me just sounds like you are talking, not necessarily rapping.

Sorry, that's just my opinion.
Nov 27 2008 12:14AM
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GingerKid08
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Not to piss you off or anything, but your flow is pretty terrible. Your forcing it sooo hard. Beats are seet though.
Nov 27 2008 3:16AM
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GingerKid08
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Someone had to tell you the truth eventually :(
Nov 27 2008 3:18AM
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Elg
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what program are you using?
Nov 27 2008 3:53AM
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SirFryanator
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appreciate it man. like, the tone is forced or the flow is forced?
Nov 27 2008 10:34AM
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Mooserz
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honestly if i were you I would stick to making beats because you seem to be really nasty at that~ rapping however not so much~ but if you want it keep going for it man dont let anyone stop you
Nov 27 2008 12:39PM
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GingerKid08
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Both, It sounds like your just  trying to emulate the generic rap flow, it sounds really tense and stiff.
Nov 27 2008 1:18PM
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SirFryanator
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alright. got any artists that you would recommend me listen to? I try to be original but I need some help at times :P
Nov 27 2008 2:57PM
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statuswhitegirl
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the rick roll beat is fuckin ill
but i have to agree with the others, i dont like the voice, i think it sounds too much like a white kid trying to rap, no offense, maybe its too forced try just normally rapping without forcing it too sound good
Nov 27 2008 3:03PM
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WillStart
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your beats are getting soo sick, keep it up matt
Nov 27 2008 3:05PM
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SirFryanator
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this one I tried to get it to be less forced and more flow-ey.
this is just a once-through so just see if it's better since I'm definitely working with it
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgYlW_YGo
Nov 27 2008 5:54PM
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IanAvery-Leaf
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Dope! Rick roll LOL
Nov 27 2008 7:47PM
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T-Holt
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Dude, the beats are so dope.  It's hard to make your voice sound better cus it's your voice.  My advice is focus on the beats, and then the lyrics, and then the singing.  That's my order of how good they are.  But don't let anyone stop you from doin it if you like it.
Nov 27 2008 11:04PM
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laxstar
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hate to repeat what others have already said but beats are really fucking sick deffinatly your talent rapping not so much not trying to be an asshole but d what u love...
Nov 28 2008 1:41AM
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