but i dont really like your voice
the rick roll beat is sick as fuck though
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but i have to agree with the others, i dont like the voice, i think it sounds too much like a white kid trying to rap, no offense, maybe its too forced try just normally rapping without forcing it too sound good
Dude, the beats are so dope. It's hard to make your voice sound better cus it's your voice. My advice is focus on the beats, and then the lyrics, and then the singing. That's my order of how good they are. But don't let anyone stop you from doin it if you like it.
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