I agree with the guy who commented on your video about the story, but I'd say turn the contrast and maybe the saturation down a tonits a little hard to watch, I mean some of its good but don't over do it
Watching skibladers is like watching a midget play baseball. It's not nice to laugh but it's just too damn funny to resist. - Slandis
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it gets pretty damn sick, i'm not gonna lie. i think it would be a sweet interrupting segment or intro to a skate video if you're planning on making one. it gets me stoked as if i was about to watch some epic skating. only criticism i could think of is that some of the effects look overdone, and kind of like those camera phone styles ya know? but a lot of those crazy color shots work pretty well IMHO.
I don't know much about editing, but some guy who knows what he's talking about once said to me that beginners tend to use too much effects in their editing/music mixes ... and I think that's the case here, quantity doesn't mean quality