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beezey
Posts: 9027 - Karma: 428
http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12783153

I could win an ipod and 100$ or something It would really be apreciated
Apr 30 2008 2:34AM
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dman1260
Posts: 899 - Karma: 13
done, good luck.

Do i get any good karma for this?....j/k
Apr 30 2008 2:38AM
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BravoWhiskey5280
Posts: 4020 - Karma: 520
Done-10/10, good poem too
Apr 30 2008 2:40AM
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beezey
Posts: 9027 - Karma: 428
oh yes I'm giving karma too!
Apr 30 2008 2:41AM
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E.Durtschi
Posts: 250 - Karma: 203
nice poem... i gave you a 10!
Apr 30 2008 2:45AM
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.nafus.
Posts: 1298 - Karma: 10
done, i tried to read it but it didnt flow with the beat of the song im listening to so i couldnt do it haha
Apr 30 2008 2:45AM
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beezey
Posts: 9027 - Karma: 428
and i gave you karma ha
Apr 30 2008 2:46AM
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aaron.ebner
Posts: 2868 - Karma: 61
10 from me too..... everyone could use a 100 doll hairs!
Apr 30 2008 2:48AM
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buchanan.
Posts: 1911 - Karma: 156
naaace poem, teenn outa ten
Apr 30 2008 2:57AM
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titsLOL
Posts: 7485 - Karma: 396
I can't read, but I'll have my mom read it to me later.
Apr 30 2008 3:31AM
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toominator
Posts: 4792 - Karma: 120
I'll give you a 10 too, always good to help another nser out

I didn't really get the "I saw the see and have seen the shore" line cause it didn't really seem to have much to do with giving greatness to the poor?

also rythem maybe spelt wrong?
Apr 30 2008 3:45AM
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beezey
Posts: 9027 - Karma: 428
ive saw the see and have seen the shore
the ocean is great and the shore is debrees built up from the ocean its a bunch of things that didn't really make it and ended up washed up, so its poor
and ya theres prob alot of errors
Apr 30 2008 3:48AM
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Rosbif
Posts: 2543 - Karma: 930
10, hope it helps.
Apr 30 2008 5:24AM
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comeatmebro
Posts: 10720 - Karma: 66
10. nice poem as well.
Apr 30 2008 6:54AM
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feihlination
Posts: 8356 - Karma: 1,084
i gave it a nine, since i am not a natural speaker, i cant really tel how good it is, but i sounds good when you read it, so 9
Apr 30 2008 7:00AM
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yelsel
Posts: 12967 - Karma: 3,451
10!
Apr 30 2008 9:21AM
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user098123
Posts: 6072 - Karma: 18
10, that was a good poem!
Apr 30 2008 9:28AM
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blindside
Posts: 5619 - Karma: 1,199
well i thought it was quite good...so i gave it a ten.
Apr 30 2008 9:29AM
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dave44
Posts: 11052 - Karma: 113

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Apr 30 2008 10:44AM
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Bepo
Posts: 8195 - Karma: 17
that was pretty good, 10/10
Apr 30 2008 10:47AM
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aprailey
Posts: 234 - Karma: 13
done
Apr 30 2008 11:16AM
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_dy-lan_
Posts: 206 - Karma: 9
hell of a lot better than any poem i could write. 10
Apr 30 2008 11:27AM
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Samsquanch
Posts: 450 - Karma: 26
done
Apr 30 2008 11:54AM
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Dustin.
Posts: 13839 - Karma: 7,704
Why not, 10.
Apr 30 2008 11:57AM
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proZach
Posts: 7163 - Karma: 917
10 everyone needs money.
Apr 30 2008 11:59AM
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.makuma.
Posts: 2258 - Karma: 43
10 goodluck!
Apr 30 2008 12:08PM
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something_cool
Posts: 84 - Karma: 10

10, I liked it.

Apr 30 2008 12:18PM
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SARTRON
Posts: 2969 - Karma: 87
done yey 10
Apr 30 2008 12:30PM
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andrewg
Posts: 4746 - Karma: 18
1 becuz ur a bitch
Apr 30 2008 12:44PM
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low_fidelity
Posts: 2673 - Karma: 118
god damn it i love your icon
Apr 30 2008 12:48PM
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SolMi
Posts: 337 - Karma: 14
10 it was way good
Apr 30 2008 1:19PM
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thecounty
Posts: 1450 - Karma: 290
10er, the poem iis sick
Apr 30 2008 1:23PM
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beezey
Posts: 9027 - Karma: 428
thank you guys so much!
Apr 30 2008 1:40PM
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Tinga
Posts: 11349 - Karma: 2,333
donezo
Apr 30 2008 2:01PM
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Nicholas.
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dunski
Apr 30 2008 3:10PM
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Hannah.
Posts: 4625 - Karma: 56
hey thats a pretty good poem i votedddd good luck hope you win!
Apr 30 2008 3:40PM
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St.Steezy
Posts: 4228 - Karma: 20
10
Apr 30 2008 3:43PM
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juliana.
Posts: 751 - Karma: 12
10...good luck!
Apr 30 2008 3:43PM
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mizzike
Posts: 1386 - Karma: 251
10
Apr 30 2008 3:44PM
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OAK_TREE
Posts: 2683 - Karma: 12
Done, I really enjoyed the poem. especially the ending.
Apr 30 2008 3:46PM
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BootySpunk.
Posts: 8148 - Karma: 84
10..nice poem and good luck
Apr 30 2008 3:51PM
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D-HAWK
Posts: 890 - Karma: 10
10 it was super good
Apr 30 2008 3:55PM
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B-Wayne
Posts: 144 - Karma: 109
10!!  oh yeah karma!  sweet
Apr 30 2008 4:03PM
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VERN
Posts: 215 - Karma: 171

10 was a wonderful read!

Apr 30 2008 6:21PM
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BEARS.
Posts: 5380 - Karma: 696
done.
Apr 30 2008 6:32PM
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Mat.
Posts: 7167 - Karma: 94
not the best poem but 10 for a fellow nser!
Apr 30 2008 6:59PM
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invader7
Posts: 5756 - Karma: 49
done
Apr 30 2008 7:05PM
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TerminatorX
Posts: 3087 - Karma: 169
10
Apr 30 2008 7:08PM
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kristie
Posts: 1667 - Karma: 214
10
Apr 30 2008 7:26PM
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Alex_G
Posts: 11902 - Karma: 1,018
that was sick ,10
Apr 30 2008 7:43PM
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meggles
Posts: 3156 - Karma: 54
10, go you!
Apr 30 2008 7:43PM
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