It wasnt too bad, good story but the plot arc could use some work. the resolution comes too soon to the climax, and over all it could be shortened by atleast 30%. other wise it was good, only a few technial things, you broke the 180 line a couple of times which changes your screen direction but if your new to making movies it happens all the time. good composition and exposure on ur shots dont take any of this the wrong way, im a film school student at the colorado film school so im a harsh critic. i really liked the idea and i think you could re edit it shorter and make it better. my teachers allways tell me to shorten my edits and evertime it makes them better. but keep it up, its better then some off the first year students at my school
I dont know much about videography or whatever, but I definitely enjoyed it. My roommate is in school majoring in film and he said he really digged it too.