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Website i just created... need some feedback

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iLLbiLLy
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i just got done creating the website for my "production".  Its the first one ive ever made and i dont have 2 much experance with flash.  Feedback would be greatly appraited, i can take critismum*sp so tell me what you think.   btw just incase you were wondering about the shitty top boarder its a time lapses of a day and it changes depending on what hour and what min. it is. this is being posted in multipul cult froms for various reasons so if u see it twice dont freak out

http://www.hajproductions.com
Aug 6 2006 3:44AM
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jd_1260
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tahts pretty dope
Aug 6 2006 3:54AM
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titsLOL
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that's dope, where's that mountain??
Aug 6 2006 9:19AM
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bangarangmules
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thats sick man, i really like it.
Aug 6 2006 9:26AM
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iLLbiLLy
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north carolina
Aug 6 2006 9:27AM
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.Brink.
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looks nice, great job
Aug 6 2006 9:35AM
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freeskier1919
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that was sick man
Aug 6 2006 9:48AM
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Armada+ar5
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i like it, its deffently different and has a killer plot with like the summer shit in that backround
Aug 6 2006 10:19AM
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soycapitan2
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looks pretty good to me
Aug 6 2006 10:20AM
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doitbig
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i think its fucking sick :)
Aug 6 2006 10:39AM
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-dva-
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looks good, but a couple suggestions. your news heading doesnt have the same animation as the rest, so just to make things more uniform i'd hook that up. also, it seems like spelling isnt your forte. having tons of spelling mistakes on your site makes it seem unproffesional. type everything into word first, or have someone proofread it before you upload or something. anyway, those are just very minor things, so all in all, keep up the good work
Aug 6 2006 10:53AM
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iLLbiLLy
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i think i fixed most of the stuff u just said^. and i added a new NEWS page witch i think looks a little better. still workin out the kinks tho
Aug 6 2006 2:29PM
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-dva-
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word, looks good. i really like the daily time lapse, thats so creative
Aug 6 2006 9:14PM
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SHIFTYshifty
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ya thats pretty ill
Aug 8 2006 10:04AM
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holyDINOSAURS
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the coolest thing is that little clock with the seconds bar. i love it
Aug 8 2006 7:43PM
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iLLbiLLy
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lol i had an hour and minets one 2 but it took up 2 much space and was kinda pointless
Aug 10 2006 10:17PM
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[steez]wrecka18
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It's ok. I thought the neon green made it kinda confusing. Not a bad job though.
Aug 10 2006 11:00PM
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freeskibum82
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one: the file is huge.. two: lose the mouseover noise.. very distracting. three: change the text at the bottom from a serif to a sans-serif. You've kind of limited your space for content though to a mere roughly 600px X 300px. unless u are going to use xml loaded text and scroll it you could run into some problems fitting all the information you may have.

other than that looks good, and the clock is nice

Aug 11 2006 7:30AM
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Geoff.
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i dont know much about all the technical shit but that is an ill site
Aug 11 2006 9:48AM
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Beamer12
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cool site..good skiing too i liked the teaser
Aug 11 2006 12:30PM
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