Freestyle is back

no prob it buggeed me for awhile, j5 owns

i didn't know people took Lil G seriously. had i known this was a serious 'im the best wanna be rapper' thread, i would've kept the altering of lyrics out of this page. I didn't mean to taint the raw street content posted here on NS.com. if I was trying to make it in the rap game on NS.com, I wouldn't want someone to compare my free style to someone who actually made money doing it in the business.

on that note: i'm pretty sure i've heard that superbowl line a couple times, with different teams at different years. should've gone with 'i'm the cowboys and you're the bills' that would've emphasized a bigger, better bad ass persona you were hinting at. however, i don't want to start alter your lysics and 'claim' them or anything.

Are you talking about mine? I said the superdome. If you got that it meant that that's where a fairly large amount of black people were staying during Hurricane Katrina. Therefore, there was a lot of black people in it. Hence the line i wrote. None of that has come from songs, they are all my words to my knowledge. I thought it was pretty good, and I'm not tryign to be serious or a die hard rapper. Just having a little fun, I'm sorry you have to analyze my rap to point out something suspicious.

at least say what song ur stealing so people know what it is

nope wasn't talking about you. it was the rock and roll guy or something along those lines

If you're talking about mine, that's all my words. It's not that hard to rhyme words. I don't need to steal other people's work. Google every phrase if you like.

ah there it is.

no he was talking about mine man. Except I wrote that.

no not you both bitchass and lil g just slightly altered songs,urs was legit

i like lil_G but he got PWNEDDDDDD!!!!!

I appologize, my line was sort of similar I thought you were talking about that,

I take it to the streets- carjack 5-0
Pack toast like breakfast to go, let ya know
Up front that in my trunk I got this big ass bag
When opened up it resembles a weapons show
Wrap sheet in black heat for murder and death
The pistol on me that I rock it ain’t by Mitchell and Ness
I be medicinal tests cuz I’m sick in the brain
Sick of the game, never sick of just inflictin’ this pain
I’m thinkin’ names on the reg like a break for the third leg
Weeks later, wind up in the woods like a birds egg
I got the knife now limbs I’m hackin’ off
Plus I fire techs like layers do Mackintosh
Slackin’ off ain’t allowed when you’re on a mission
To annihilate entire nightclub crowds
Emptyin’ every clip, I’m fightin’ all types of shit
I’ve been hit, I really like this shit
Some muthafuckas should be payin’ me to write their shit
Whilin’ out bangin’ out Bicardi bites and shit
I won’t settle, I deserve a medal
Vigilante rebel bout to take it to the next level

I load up the glock I line cats in chalk
Lotta pigs pullin’ triggers to blaze ya whole block
Stick a plate in ya chest, give you, a grim death
Don’t, pretend to save I grade the skin flesh
My retinas steam but it’s wrapped in violence
When I, close my eyes I see visions of tyrants
Lock and load fuck buryin’ heaters
I’m ruthless like a mother tryin’ to bury a fetus
I’ll wet you up like you stuck in the rain
Hit you in the jugular vain I’m pluggin’ ya brain

Yo what’s that? fuck that!
Muthafuckas bustin’ at me I bust back
Sword blaze my forte you can’t floor Shay
My style is negative like the image I portray
Change descriptions, let my beard grow
I’m weird though, drunk off a Jose Cuervoe
Tryin’ to make it to the next bar without crackin’ a whip
5-0s start crackin’ the whip
Do a search find crack in the whip
Grab a jacket and split [cop yells “hold it right there”]
I’ll be back in a bit now I’m packin’ a clip


unaltered. 7L & Esoteric - Graphic Violence. that's some true rappin from a white boston kid.

to clear dis shit up i did what i did cause bitchassphatz was too stupid to follow tha simple rules

you a sad excuse for a boy tryin to rhyme

nigga i'll never be of your kind/

faggot images are tha first that come to your mind

and your desire to experience a man from tha behind/

so bitch its time to get on your knees

its not for the purpose that you please/

so step back its your misinterpretation

its your obsession and masculine infatuation/

on your knees bitch means an execution

anythin you write i wont read cause its rhyme pollution/

a bullet to your head is tha only solution

i'll kill every fucker as stupid lookin as you with no exclusion/

so step back don't sweat cause you aint a big threat

you unreconized and unimportant like the New York Mets/

a stupid fool like bitchassphatz cant follow tha rules

xxscratchxxx just made tha fag look like a fool

nothing you write could have anythin on me

i'm a god on this earth by all worship me/

i'm as untouchable as the sun in the skies above

try to come close and you get caught in my lyrical glove/

evenvelopes you and chokes out your breath

meeting me is like meeting your own death/

so here's something you need, some criteria

no one will ever shed a single tear for ya/

at ya lyrical funeral pyre cause my mind never tires

and my words will pierce your dome like fire/

one round is all I need to knock you out the ballpark

one round is all i need put a bullet to my mark/

i'm more gangsta than you could ever dream

so tryin to speak down on me will never redeem/

tha fact that you never experienced tha pink color

since tha only pussy you've seen in that of your mother/

16 bars get it right muthafucka

that is hideous

say what you like youn bitch

this is for lil_g

im sorry to bring this up, but from here its true,
the reason we dont like you and make fun of you,
is the same reason Nas has got beef with 50,
you as fake as a porn stars oversized titty,
always acting tough, and rough and wild,
when the only thing i see, is an angry little child,
you should take all that mean talk back that you said,
before you wake up with someone standin over your bed,
ready to take you, make you cry like a bitch,
before they bury you, in the shallowest ditch,
and i say ditch cause you wont be the only one goin down,
theres plenty of you, your whole clique, includin that westsidehavoc clown,
you mammas boys are fittin to be taken, made dissappeared,
cause if theres one thing i hate, its boys trying to get feared,
now i'm just about done, i dont care if it measures up,
to your lame ass specs, like trying to fill a holy cup,
maybe someday, when you leave your parents crib,
you can find out how real people live, minus your bib

i noticed it tooo!!!!!

ok lil g i bet u dont come up with ur own rhymes cuz when u freestyle u spell stuff out perfectly but when u talk u slepl lkie siht. so i et u just get ur freestyle from other websites and just copy and paste it in here r a faggit


and this thread also needed a BUMP

ah man, i think i lost! Lil' G you're the man! wait, your not the man, you're a street nigga that wants to be abused by the man! Word nigga! fuck yeah, i can see your asspirations coming true homie! you're on the right path. now you need 8 kids from different women and hop on welfare. you'll be living the thug life son! fuck learning how to type correctly, you're ain't gonna have to your keyboard long N.E.Way. Once you start feanin' for that rock, you're gonna be sturgglin to find something to smoke it out of. You know your pimp will allow you to hit it outa his penis pump. so when you're locked up in jail, using the internet again, keep ns.com posted on how the whole thug thing worked for you in a primarily white society. I encourage you to keep reenforcing the stereotypes white america has for pathedic, lazy niggers. Word bro! stay true to the black movement!