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imoormanNot sure what order these will show up in, but in no particular order these are a pic from the rainbow rail at keystone, a hawaiian sunset pic, a mountain goat pic from a hike, a celebration pic from the Broncos AFC championship win, and a little grab pic from keystone. All pics are mine, and all criticism is welcome.
Beware, I'm mean.
1. Good timing, Leave more room at top, don't crush the blacks.
2. Cliche, the colour is good but the composition and visual features bland and lacking.
3. Snapshit
4. Go straight from above and max. symmetry or add something in the background.
5. Don't go for center comp, I like sky/skier shots but try to work with either the background or go for clean without background, now it just crosses that line in the background,
If it was possible, I personally would have shot the photo lower to the ice to bring out that pattern in a bit more dramatic fashion. But that might not have been an option. Just my .02!
If it was possible, I personally would have shot the photo lower to the ice to bring out that pattern in a bit more dramatic fashion. But that might not have been an option. Just my .02!
thanks man, appreciate it!
I definitely could have done that. I was having issues with focus and getting the right balance between ice and mountains. If i get to go back before the ice starts to melt I will try that out. I shot a few ice-level in landscape, but didn't turn out the way i wished
If it was possible, I personally would have shot the photo lower to the ice to bring out that pattern in a bit more dramatic fashion. But that might not have been an option. Just my .02!
I might stop down the image just a little bit to increase the depth of field. The focus within the image is not optimal so either the lens was out of focus or the depth of field was. additionally I might go with a slightly shorter exposure; the motion of the water was a little overpowering and the background was a tiny bit overexposed. All in all the composition was good though and it was a good image.
